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Damn

The animating's great, I like the scythe side spin and that other guy's got some kickass custom sprites. I only wish it had been longer even if it was just for some application thing :(
But, in the short time there was, you totally got your ass handed to you :P

Nice

I could see your arm at parts but that didn't really take away from how cool it was to watch this. You do need a preloader and play button though.

Good job

Nice, I liked it, but your subtitles are messed up, not sure if that's just me.

Well...

It sounded like some messed up kids show up until they cut him open which the yelling sounded horrible for, I mean, imagine if you were being cut open, would you be slowly questioning their reasoning AFTER you were cut open then quietly yelling? (I know that last bit sounds contradicting, but I hoped I got my point across). At least your mic quality was good and the idea was good, but just poorly played out. Also, please work on more detail in not only your characters, but the background as well, there wasn't much to look at.
It wasn't that bad for a first flash though, just figure out how to make a preloader too.
Hope this review was helpful for you.

Unicornbeaver responds:

Wow, thanks for all the pointers, I'll try to make my next one better

It was touching

And to keep your audio from overlapping, click on it in the timeline and go to properties and change it from event to stream. That way it'll also be easier to sync and the music will only go as far as you make it in the timeline.

I liked the feelings put into this animation, but i give it 7/10 for the audio overlap and missing a preloader and play button.

Well...

You appear to have what it takes to animate well, but i think you need to practice your drawing a bit, as well as colour scheme choices. There was also too much grey and not enough actual backgrounds.

You did a good job

I'm glad that you draw a lot like Edd so it actually looked like it was him and not some weird version of him :P
Great animation and I love Eddsworld, but i think some parts could've used a bit more detail, like the toaster turning into the robot. Looked a lot like a bunch of grey boxes.
But I liked it, though not the High School Musical :(

Lazyfeet responds:

Fair points actually. I think I could have retouched a lot of the animation. That's laziness on my behalf :S

I'm glad you enjoyed it though ;)

note to self* no high school musical.

Ehhh...

The animating was very mediocre and the video was too short.

I agree with everything Stickman91 said

The narration was dull and awkward. You need to have enthusiasm in what you say, otherwise no one's going to think it's funny.
But the animation was okay and the idea's nice, but as Stickman91 said, not well executed.
I also wish you good luck on your next entry.

Brewster responds:

Thanks. You can take up all the audio stuff zookyman2. He did the viocees, I did the animation.

It's not that bad

It's short though, and the drawings are not quite great. I also think you should you should've made more backgrounds. The solid colours were really boring to look at while the only animation was the guy's mouth at times.
Overall, s'okay, but put more effort into it.

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